: Talking to the Moon :

This is very cute, and I really love the pony design, especially the white markings -- makes her seem somewhat foxlike ^^
It looks very much like the style of the show, though the pencil looks a bit out of place for some reason -- maybe trying outlining it in the same way you did the pony (not with just black lines). The positioning looks okay for the front half, but the abdomen doesn't make much sense. If the small line is meant to be her spine, then you would probably be able to see more of her legs and part of her other wing.
But at first glance and overall this looks very good and clean!